Background and education
Sarah grew up in San Diego and studied architecture at Cal Poly San Luis Obispo (B.Arch, 2018) followed by an M.Arch at SCI-Arc finishing in 2021. Her undergraduate thesis on adaptive reuse of mid-century commercial strips earned a department citation. Coming out of school she joined a 35-person residential firm in Santa Monica as a Junior Architect, where she spent two years on construction documents for high-end single-family homes in Brentwood and Pacific Palisades.
Where she was stuck
By early 2024 Sarah had decided to make the jump from boutique residential to a multi-disciplinary firm with civic and commercial scope. She wrote what she thought was a strong portfolio of her best ten projects, sent it to ten firms (Gensler, HOK, Perkins Eastman, AECOM, IBI, NBBJ, SmithGroup, Gresham Smith, Stantec, CallisonRTKL), and waited. Four months passed: two automated rejections, eight silences. She started doubting whether she was qualified.
What the review caught
The PortfolioMentor analysis flagged three problems within sixty seconds. First, the cover image: an overexposed model photograph that telegraphed "student work" in the first three seconds of judgment. Second, twelve different line-weight conventions across thirty-eight floor plans (the AI cited specific page numbers). Third, every project description was written in academic third-person passive voice ("The project explores the relationship between...") instead of practitioner first-person ("I led the schematic-design phase, coordinated three consultants, and produced the final construction documents..."). The score was 42/100, banded "Developing", with a hard ceiling on Project Selection & Curation at 32/100.
What Sarah changed
One Saturday she rebuilt the cover with the strongest 1:50 wall section from her Marin Residence project. On Sunday she rewrote every project description in the first person, naming the team size and her specific role on each project. On Monday morning she rebuilt all twelve plans to a single 4-tier line-weight system (cut walls 0.6mm, edges 0.3mm, surfaces 0.15mm, reference 0.1mm). Total work: fourteen hours over a single weekend. Re-run review: 91/100.
What happened next
She resubmitted the new portfolio to all ten firms on Tuesday. Gensler emailed back Wednesday afternoon. HOK called Friday. Perkins Eastman scheduled a phone screen for the next Monday. Sarah took the Gensler interview track all the way through; on the second round, the design director told her the level of role attribution and drawing consistency was "unusual at the junior level". The offer arrived three weeks after the resubmit, at the Senior Designer band, one level higher than Sarah had originally been applying for.
Where she is now
Sarah is in her second year at Gensler Los Angeles, working on a 380,000 sq ft federal courthouse competition and a 22-story mixed-use tower in downtown LA. She refers two to three job-seeking peers to PortfolioMentor every quarter.
